Friday, April 18, 2008

feelings. poem 5

feelings are things that come and go
feelings are something that you have for someone
feelings are things that you show for someone
feelings are things that you go through in your life
when you are upset you feel like exploding
when you sad you cry a river
when you happy you feel so high
when you are low you feel upset down

when you are confused you dont know what to do
when you love someone you cant stop thinking about them
when you are lonely you feel like dieing
when you are scared you are afraid
when you are hungry you are frustrated
when you are sleepy you feel tired
when you are calm you feel relax
all these are feelings that everyone have from time to time


i used a metaphor in the fifth line
i used a simile in the seventh line

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me and my sisters

me and my sisters