love is something that comes from the heart
love is something that you dont take for granted
love is something true
love is something that you dont say
love is something that you show
love is something that you dont say just to say it
you should never play with that word cause it breaks hearts
Friday, April 4, 2008
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You have offered strong personal sentiments here. It comes from your heart. For the sake of the English class you are taking and the unit on poetry we are studying, try to use figurative language in your poetry. Take a look at Clenched Soul by Pablo Neruda. Observe how he uses metaphors and similes to describe what he sees.
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