you use to be so big
but now you are a pig
you use to be so bold
you are so old
you were my man
but i want to slap you with a pan
you were my life,my last, and my love
you were my hubby,my heart,and my hope
you were my life
but i wanted to be your wife
i missed your hugs
now i want to slap you with a mug
but now you are a bug
you once was a toy
that turned into a boy
you were my mall
but now you are my ball
you had me so high
that i believe i can fly
you had me so high that it felt like i was in the sky
thats unknown love
Friday, April 18, 2008
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This is supposed to be a poem of rhyming couplets, but you have not maintained it throughout. You can't have some rhyming couplets and some lines that are not.
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